Well you got a nice mood going there.
Sadly though the song doesn't go anywhere, and I'm pretty sure trance is for tripping... so you need to take your audience somewhere.
I think it needs a bit of percussion too... but maybe thats just my tastes.
keep up the good work!6/10 Honest reviews... how often you get that on ng...
It's ambient... So, yeah, not really in need of percussions there.
Anyway, trance can be many thing from cheesy to deep emotional music. It can be a daze, or it can be meaningless. It doesn't necessarily need to be "tripping."
Thanks for the review though, good to hear some honesty and feedback from people that know what they're talking about.
Short review for short song... it was ok... 6/10 bye!
Short vision of grandeur
What program do you use to make this?
I love this song, short but gets its message accross.
I love your little drum bursts, but I would of used a more powerfull sounding drum kit, ya know make it more "in your face" but appart from that I felt your vibe and thats a always a good thing in my book.
sizzling. 8/10 Keep up the good work!
I'm glad you liked the track and my "drum burst" but if I used a more powerfull kit, it might sound kinda weird considering the melody is pretty soft. I dunno. I guess you never know till you try lol. Thanks for the review. Oh and I use Reason 4
good honest work
four notes... Gets the job done, and it does have a happy youth feel.
I love how you spiced it up too, with the guitar.
Only quirk I have is 4 notes over 3.42 mins gets old after a while.
Try throwing a few more riffs next time, read up about a few classic chord proggresions and try some notes from them if they sound good together.
Happy and uplifting, a bit long though for what it delivers. 7/10 Keep up the good work!
I feel like im listening to some kind of wierd wind.
So airy, not many deep sounds, they are vibrant but feel empty.
Simple too, simplicity is beauty.
its ok but sadly it didn't move me much. 6/10 keep up the good work though!
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